"Forbiden Fruit: The Tempation of Edward Cullen" with commentary

A commentated version of a Twilight fanfiction.

Summary: Beautiful new girl Atlantiana Rebekah Loren arrives in Forks and unwittingly finds herself caught in a love triangle as Edward considers leaving Bella for her. Also she might be a vampire. And she smells like mint and cinnamon.

Content warnings: sexual content, consent issues, rape of a minor by an adult, self-harm, violence, non-canon character death, drug/alcohol use, bestiality

19,824 words | 62 pages